Thursday 17 May 2012

Out of Bounds, the Novel.

Here's mk 1 of the cover of my soon-to-be-published golf adventure novel, Out of Bounds. It's a 64,000 word humorous ebook and everything is ready to go ... except the cover. What do you think? Would this cover make you want to buy the book? Or would you just bypass it without reading the blurb? Here's the blurb:
Jane Walters' humdrum existence changes dramatically when she and her husband are playing golf on the Mt Ruapehu golf course, and Ruapehu erupts. A mysterious American, Elwood Thomas, appears from nowhere and helps her off the mountain. Is his continued interest in Jane altruistic? Or does he have an ulterior motive? Mt Ruapehu holds all the answers.
I think the blurb also needs work. It's a bit airy-fairy.   

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  1. audibum18 May 2012 at 03:16

    colours great. mt great title good, however had to look hard to see flag and link this to title being a golf story. bolder very large i was what my eye drew me to 1st. is the husband dead n elwood to take up the challege to conquer golf and romance. blurb . doezn't tell me what the book is about love /golf. as you said WIP. loking to read this.

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  2. Ms Kallas-Way19 May 2012 at 00:11

    Quite right. Will completely redo cover and blurb as it's a novel that has a bit of golf in it, but is not a golf novel. Many thanks for feedback.

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